Hello

Hello

A Poem by Alfred Kukitz
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A.M. Greetings

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Hello

A shadow of sweetness
Tears searching for the sky
My humbled awareness peeking
at the dimples in your smile.

© 2017 Alfred Kukitz


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Thanks Bacchus!

On certain days and certain moments the flower of words spring forth.

Happy Happy '17

Al

Posted 7 Years Ago


a shadow of sweetness
is exactly what the the poem is
tears and dimples...
simply put

Posted 7 Years Ago


Thanks Valentine!

Having Jackson here is reason enough!

Regards,
Al

Posted 7 Years Ago


Thanks Jacob!

Some thoughts take me back to my nursing days when politics wasn't an issue and my tenderness of the ill shined.

Regards,
Al

Posted 7 Years Ago


Thanks Tazeen!

Did I tell you, a love dimples, the problem is they won't marry me.

Happy Happy '17

Al

Posted 7 Years Ago


Not many have that A.M. smile without that first cup of coffee. Valentine

Posted 7 Years Ago


you are in a mood this morning...and it is producing some excellent lines---such tender words.

j.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Hello
Stunning and symbolically meaningful lines.

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on January 2, 2017
Last Updated on January 2, 2017
Tags: sky, smile, Shadow

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Alfred Kukitz
Alfred Kukitz

Deering, NH



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