The afterparty

Poem written taking part in a challenge to write a poem using the words: shine, ground, line, sound, sneaking, master, freaking, faster, hope, four, cope, tore, champagne, refrain,

Let the sun shine
On the ground
Creating a golden line

 

 
In the morning
There is still no sound
Sneaking around

Silence is the master
When it comes to freaking
Out faster

 

I hope that
Four people can
Cope after discovering
 

The drunken guest
Who tore the house down
After having had
 

Too much champagne
He was unable
To refrain himself!

 

Author's Note

I jotted this down online in the Vicious Circle group's forum ... I wrote this in a few minutes, so I suppose this will not be my best work, but it was a nice experiment to take part in!
However, I wanted to write everything far too quickly, so I failed to read an important part of the instructions, as Constance pointed out in her review...
Those who have rated me, you have been kind to me...
Since this is an experiment and not my normal kind of writing, I have switched off 'rating' just for this once!

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I have to crack up cause I remember having nights like this that turn into days... what wonderful memories your poem brings back to me.

[cyanskye]

Nice take on the challenge, and fun surprise ending.

[Constance]

This is cute and you used the words well, but I think the challenge was to use those lines as your end rhymes, for every line. Freaking is a difficult one to use, isn't it?
Nicely written poem. I like the short, swift flow.