On the salt plains of your travels.

Salination peaked,

the banks broken,

where once tears reigned,

now leaving

a trail of salt.

While the river ran dry

that once flowed,

lies a grand canyon,

of love parched on

blood empty,

and a heart cured

on air dried love.

Reviews

[DIVYA]

Loved the imagery, its different and inspiring. The heart, like leather cured to be tough and impermeable....

[Doodley]

Hahaha. Seems we posted similar thematic pieces at the same time!

This piece has a very delicate sadness, beautifully worded and with excellent use of images and metaphor.

These eloquently written pieces are taking your poetry to a higher plane. Very well done!

[andrew mitchell]

Doodley coming from you that has discipline for detail in your writes, the structure, the imagery that you portray, I am humbled by your response. Thank you.

[Doodley]

Well deserved acclaim. As for me, i am struggling in winter hibernation!

[ms. barrie]

beautifully pensive ink, vividly original portrayal of disillusionment upon one's soul. written with eloquence. - xx --

[andrew mitchell]

Wow thank you for a great review, I am humbled by your lovely comments.

[ms. barrie]

you're most welcome, always my pleasure, Andrew - xx -