Watch my  jigsaw space!

Watch my jigsaw space!

A Poem by andrew mitchell

While the enormity of the universe
stretches far beyond our comprehension
our quest to find our little space
can lead to claustrophobia,
but will our tiny jigsaw piece
fit into the bigger picture?

© 2017 andrew mitchell


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now that you mention it ... might need a little trimming here and there ... or ... maybe i should set it on fire and be the rebel...without a cause of course ;)))
food for thought sir .. thanks for sharing ... love the opening lines ... it puts a really healthy perspective in my noodle
E.

Posted 6 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

6 Years Ago

Lol you’re one healthy noodle!🤔🤓
Einstein Noodle

6 Years Ago

oh sometimes i wonder dear friend...sometimes i wonder :
What a thought, what a thought...have often wondered the same... I think the quest to find that little space causes some people to just kinda swell, eventually they don't fit in lol
Interesting philosophical piece for sure, Andrew.

Posted 6 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

6 Years Ago

Thank you doc, I shall read your works soon YumnaKay.
Dr. YumnaKay

6 Years Ago

;P that's not a problem. You're welcome, AM (:
Expresses the thinking of the majority who feel inferior to the multinational hype.

Posted 6 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

6 Years Ago

It’s safety in numbers John, thanks for dropping by.😀
John Alexander McFadyen

6 Years Ago

Indeed Andrew.
Pushing them into the wrong space (did that as a kid) results in useless picture - so very philosophical here Andrew - like it a lot.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Tony Jordan

6 Years Ago

Hey Gee !
I know zilch about cricket but I am thinking you hope England fare well (yes I hav.. read more
andrew mitchell

6 Years Ago

Thanks tony and gee I don’t think England will be a push over unless we improve heaps, will be clo.. read more
Gee

6 Years Ago

Here’s hoping.....

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Added on October 31, 2017
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