All Alone

This isn't supposed to be good or anything, I just needed to vent.. I might end up deleting it later, but yeah.

Needing to cry,
Not being able to.
Dying inside,
No one even notices.

I have to be strong, 
And there for others,
But there aren't many,
There for me. 

Sadness and hurt, 
Does anyone care?
Not really, obviously,
I mean who would? 

Tears clouding my vision,
I can't hold it together,
Can't help it at all,
I'm breaking down..

There's one person,
Who seems to care,
Besides that person,
I'm all alone. 

Reviews

[Patrick Henry]

Beautiful Amanda. I love that pure sense of all senses alive at once. It's humbling to realize that even if the heart is worn as armor to stave off negativity, that there is a constant emotive response to the relationship we carry will all those around us, and how very personal and sometimes introverted on purpose, it can be. You are not alone...... your poems keep me grounded in reminding me why my face performs a smile!! Beautiful Amanda. xoxo -Mark

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Awwww, thank you Mark(: I'm glad that you truly enjoy my poetry, and that it brings a smile to your face. That was a very bad day for me, I don't feel so alone now though, which is good.

[Rahul]

There's one person,
Who seems to care,
Besides that person,
I'm all alone. Beautiful lines you wrote in this stanza :) you always made me speechless by your words.
100/100.

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Thank you so much (: so glad that you enjoyed it!

[Rahul]

Well, I always enjoy your awesome writes :)

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

I'm so glad!

[Forever Hidden]

You take the simplest words, and turn them into the most beautiful sentences out there!
This has to be one of my favorite poems from you, as everyone one time or another can relate to it :)
Excellent work

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Awww, thank you so much FH (:

[Shreyas Tripathy]

Beautiful ending to a sad, sad poem ...
Loved the last stanza ! Very nice

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Awww, thanks so much(:

[Jordan's Back]

This is a Very deep and profound piece. You have keep rhythm strong and an even flow constant and you allowed us to peer into your soul and feel the anguish. I hope you are feeling better.

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Thanks!

[An owl on the moon]

How bitterly sad... oh, just caught me off guard... There is so much pain... and the feeling of isolation... Giving all but getting so little in return... If you''ve ever felt like this, I hope it's never for long. You seem so awesome, precious poet.

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Awwww, thank youu!