Lend Me Your Love

Please leave your love with me

I give you my vow

I won’t smother it with neglect.

I am just not the type.

 

Please lend me your love

Just for a little while.

Leave me in delight

Before you leave.

 

I know it sounds crazy,

Because who would like to borrow a thing such as love?

But I know that just a little of your love

Is better than a bunch of any other’s.

 

So please,

My dark bliss,

Leave your love with me

I promise to give it back soon enough.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Falling Leaf.]

"My dark bliss." A mysterious twist. A paramour? An obsession? An addiction? If anyone tells you to remove that line, don't you listen to them. It's the gold of this piece.


Happy writing,
Savannah

[Amanda J. S.]

Thank you!

[Falling Leaf.]

No trouble at all

[Ufi Auttorri ~ UfoAutho..]

Excellent! Where did this come from?

[Amanda J. S.]

My mind? :-D

[Ufi Auttorri ~ UfoAuthor]

Well, that could be the start of a good discussion on the true source(s) of inspiration. Of course it came from your mind but where did your mind get it from? Oh, there's the rub! :o)

[Amanda J. S.]

I don't know! :-) Guess I am a bit... lonely....

[de_maruf]

hah ha lending love!
whatever,
it expresses keenness of heart to love in unique way
good one

[Amanda J. S.]

Thank you :-)