push pull and polar opposites

can't ever leave it in that calm collection

Surprise

something you never felt before
someone(s) who wanted HER more

funny how such a little thing
can put a kink in your swing

be careful what you wish for
there's two sides to that open door.

theory of relativity

he is relatively romantic
when he enters her
for me
but nothing is relative
about the way he gives his heart
to me

who are you?
assumptive premises swim in your sea of lies
who are you to judge the me inside his eyes?

full circle on the other side

Working so hard
at
containment.
erecting
barriers
around our secret parts
suppressing
words
uninterpretable
to our weary hearts

opening the door
to something
more ...

Author's Note

Reviews

[NoelHC]

Nothing makes the heart grow fonder than to see someone else desires the one you are with. The first snippet is my favorite.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks so much, and I agree, on all counts.

[Lydia Shutter]

Oh, yes, there are two sides and those who refuse to see the side on the other side of the door are in for a rude awakening! Even in the midst of romance, one has to be wary...it's a shame really, but it is the truth. I so enjoy your words. Lydi**

[Lyn Anderson]

Ah, thank you. I post a sappy one and then feel I have to balance it out.:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, lots of walls, disinterest, after enough pain, love can be a cat and mouse game....

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks for stopping in. I know I have been gone a lot.

[redzone]

"containment", "walls", why do we live in a world where we are constantly on the defensive and self preservation, our hearts closed so as not to suffer abuse, pain, disappointments... I like how you express this "push/pull" and polar opposite KL.... Don't think there is a "relative" love just the male patriarchal right to screw over women in as many ways as possible... anyway you always find the artistic ways of expressing this... good to read you again KL

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you hon, I appreciate your insight. :)

[Jon Roggie]

full circle, and can we open those doors?

I hope to reach this level.

[Lyn Anderson]

More words than I would expect my friend, thank you.

[Sami Khalil]

"theory of relativity

he is relatively romantic
when he enters her
for me
but nothing is relative
about the way he gives his heart
to me"

Your writes are surpassing relativity and gaining the speed of light and wisdom. You are creative...:)........

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you so much. I haven't been around much. Trying to catch up.

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. You are welcome...:).......

[Delmar Cooper]

All good work, but of the four I liked the chastity device poem the best.

[Lyn Anderson]

How clever, thank you.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Another collection of striking writes with such blatant emotions in them all. Who are you is my favourite.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you very much. I shall have to catch up on my reading while putting off my taxes once more.