June 27, 2014

June 27, 2014

A Poem by Amber Valentine

Rain falls from the night sky,
as I'm looking into your eyes.

We're sitting under a big tree
All alone, just you and me.

The moonlight shines from behind the clouds
and the thunder roars real loud.

You pull me close,
and kiss me.

The rain falls from the night sky,
as I look into your eyes.

I realized then, that I loved you.
I loved everything about you.

I loved you just like I loved the night,
the rain, and the sky.

© 2018 Amber Valentine


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its a very good peom but you could use more discriptive words to show a little more emotion but overall its quite lovely

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Nice for a beginning > though I am not the best to judge poetry > A retired engineering lecturer

Posted 3 Years Ago


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A romantic piece:) I can tell already you love nature it is seen in your writing how you talk about rain in the sky the clouds and the sun as well as feelings.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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This is very good! It's sweet :)

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My name is Amber. I'm 19 years old and currently living in Alabama. I just wanted to share some of my writings on here. I'm no professional writer, but I would love to know what others think about my .. more..

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