Working-hate it

"but I want to exchange my damn coke-cola!"

I growled , frustrated at this really dumb teen who needs to stop slamming her fists on the counter.
"You can't exchange a soda!"

The girl rolled her ice cold eyes. "Yes you can."

Sarcasticaly , I whisper "Yup. This customer surely is always right." Than loud enough for her to hear "You cannot. Maybe somewhere else , like candy land , but here you can't."

"Ugh. I'm not paying for anything I bought. Ta-ta." The teen flipped her hair , rolled her eyes one last time and left , heels clicking.

The next customer came up. He was pretty cute. "She's not from tennesee." He said , giving a chuckle.

I chuckled too. "Yes sir'ee. Not from tennesee. Anyway , you orderin'?"

"Yup. Just cherry pie."

"We don't serve cherry pie."

He gave me a smile and whispered "I know. I needed a reason to come up here and talk to ya."

I returned the smile , just not as flirty. "Then order somethin' on the menu sir or leave the line. I got other customers."

He shrugged. "Worth a try."

As the next customer came up , Evant said. "Oh come on Kanzie. He's been flirtin' with you and givin' that gorgeous smile of his for weeks."

"Yes , but I have no interest in him."

"You mean , no interest in anybody."

"Yup." Then to stop this horrid conversation , for now , I asked the customer.

"What you orderin'?"

Author's Note

Review please.

Reviews

[Kathryn Elizabeth]

I saw a few minor errors, but overall there was nothing too major. There was one thing that just kind of bothered me though.

In the sentence: "Than* loud enough for her to hear" I believe you mean *then.

Other than that, it was an interesting read :)

[brenda]

i like this i really do why dont you try sending read reuqest not to me but to all people ? but the chapter is nice !:)

[Starrbitt]

Sorry about it being short.