In the pit or the bottom of the ocean

In the pit or the bottom of the ocean

A Poem by light and ashes

In the pit or the bottom of the ocean...
it doesn't matter.
You are with me.

I still look up and see the light of God shining me.
There is hope.

© 2020 light and ashes


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yes, there is always hope, God looks over us...

Posted 3 Years Ago


light and ashes

3 Years Ago

amen.... thank you.
Just Kim

3 Years Ago

not a problem
Hope is a bit like an eternal flame. Even if you haven't got it, someone eventually will come along to relight the torch. Just my thoughts...

Posted 3 Years Ago


light and ashes

3 Years Ago

I like that....if you can hold on long enough for them to come around. Thank you for your review.
there is always hope if we have the faith to see it.
j.

Posted 3 Years Ago


light and ashes

3 Years Ago

I think so, thank you Jacob.

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Added on May 18, 2020
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