a prayer

a prayer

A Poem by light and ashes
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Oh, forgive me, God. I am but a fool.

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My God, have mercy upon me. I am just a sinner. A fragile human being. 
I am rocked by the Ocean. My soul is tossed by the winds and the waves.
Please be patient with me.

© 2023 light and ashes


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Whoa?!! Beautiful as much as stunning words to the light at the end of the tunnel. I hadn't seen this one yet. Suppose you have to actually be here to do that..lol.Yours is a prayer worthy of the day and more. It is something everyone should learn by heart. PEACE!!

Posted 10 Months Ago


light and ashes

10 Months Ago

Peace, be still...
Thank you, friend.
I give this poem 10 out of 10 prayers.

Posted 11 Months Ago


light and ashes

11 Months Ago

Thank you, Rock and Roll Cowboy, that means a lot to me.
I’m reading this while listening to waves arguing with each other in the wind. Your poem became the lyrics to the song of the ocean. The waves may be strong, but like Peter, we are capable to rise above the storm when our focus is where it’s meant to be.

Posted 1 Year Ago


light and ashes

1 Year Ago

Wise, insightful, and poetic words, I loved them.
Thank you for
light and ashes

1 Year Ago

your review.
Love is patient and kind

God is love


Take care x lovely write



Posted 1 Year Ago


light and ashes

1 Year Ago

Thank you.
May your prayers be answered and that angry ocean becomes soothed. Thinking about you and wishing all that is calm.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


light and ashes

1 Year Ago

Thank you, Chris.
Amen! Wonderfully said! I know our Father hears all prayers!

Posted 1 Year Ago


light and ashes

1 Year Ago

Bless you, sincerely, thank you!
This was beautiful my friend, so heart felt and sincere.

Posted 1 Year Ago


light and ashes

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much, Will.
Long known prayers are the more modern comfort blankets many people need at times. Your prayer asks for forgiveness yet, in God's eyes, only mistakes happen - not sin.. Your whispered words will be heard because tis said insist that that is why space infinite exists. Patience to write, patience to be heard,, now shared by those who understand.

Posted 1 Year Ago


A beautiful prayer. Most of us at sometime or other find ourselves in stormy situations. I hope your prayers are answered and you find peace dear poet.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago



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Added on April 28, 2023
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