Skydive

Pull the

rip cord.

Let

the winds of

change

take their

course,

and feet

will

land upon

solid

ground,

with

fear left

in the clouds.

Reviews

[papaed]

e.e. cummings would appreciate this as do I. Simple, visual, and a second level of meaning. Having jumped myself, I was drawn to your theme... but would have concentrated on the adrenalin rush.

papaed

[Clockwork]

I like the duality of the piece, the image and the act of skydiving with the message of leaving behind ones troubles and struggles in the proverbial clouds. The form was also nice, mimicking the motion in a way, very well done.

[Brandon]

Nice layout, and nicely done.

[Thomas James Martin]

Great! I loved this. Wonderful feelings encapsulated.

Tom

[J.P.O.et]

I like the presentation here, visually jumping out and floating down
Like this analogy to life, jumping out and taking risks, being unafraid.
Nice readinf you, I will get to some more

J.P.O.et