Your Dream's Desire

This woman whose beauty would make God weep

The light of my world

Rebecca

I would give to you my smile

that sauntered look and walk

A long mellow daydreamed breeze

that cute look each time we talk

 

I would give to you the sunshine

a kind windy sun flowered field

Hopes to fill your hearts desire

with any dream your mind could

 wield

 

I would give to you the warm rain

sweet songs the whippoorwills sing

The eternal stars of the night

for you I would give everything

 

Author's Note

It is always the inner hope striven for throughout our lives that at one time our dreams will intersect with our reality. Such has been my own experience these last 4 years. A life spent alongside the one you love gives the meaning and purpose so sought for and desired. Happy Anniversary Becky!
Tate

Reviews

[Rick Puetter]

Dear Tate,

I have been reading your poetry for years. I have listened to the music that you've included with the poetry. I alway turn that off because I want to hear the true you without coloration. I want to hear the words. This piece was different. The music fit. It was an extension. The words were pure. I think this is your finest poem. I have read the poems about your son, and that emotion is so pure. I have read poems about your experiences, again always so pure. But here I see your heart, My Friend. It is so inescapable. You can't hide here, not even a little piece of you. It's all out there. Here is your consuming love. I read this and dropped my head because I am so glad that you have such an all-consuming love. Give your Lady a kiss from me. She is special and has won undying love from a romantic soul. I hope she appreciates the treasure. I suspect that she does, and she does have those penetrating blue eyes.

Greatest respect, and the highest marks!

A devoted Friend,

Rick

[Tate Morgan]

This may be the greatest review i ever received. I read it and in so doing was bestowed the greatest feeling of appreciation and honor. I thank you I am truly humbled
Your friend
Tate

[Rick Puetter]

Very simple, Tate! You are welcome, and I was honored to read such a pure and untarnished poem. A truly fine work.

[Magdelena]

Tate this was one piece I would forever treasure.. It marked the purist of loves that one could ever wish to achieve in their lifetimes.. I agree, the music does fit so well with your wonderful words.. I know you and the depth of feelings you have in your poetic heart. She is a beauty and the both of you are truly blessed.. Wonderful piece my dear friend and wonderful magic that was brought forth to remind us all that there is love out there like this..

Much love

Mags xx

[Becky C Strukamp]

A beautiful poem
of the adoration and love. Life comes through in our poetry so much. This is another fine example.

[KAOlmsted]

Beautifully written, Tate...your Rebecca is a truly lucky woman to have such adoration bestowed upon her by such a loving and kindhearted man...you've made each woman on this site expel a little *sigh* ;-)

[Sarah Ramsbottom]

this woman is a lucky lady! What a romantic man you seem to be. I loved the read!

[patricia]

This had a nice feel to it. I especially liked the first stanza. Well done.

[*** Hey Jude***]

Amazing how time gives greater understanding. You show this within the sacred passion held in the tenor of this poem. A write that shows beautifully the connection between you, and your beautiful wife Becky! ~ May your love forever grow! ~

[Tate Morgan]

I think you are my best friend !

[*** Hey Jude***]

I think you are awesome as well my friend, I'm honored!

[Becca Bishop]

This is so beautiful I don't know what to say :) :) :)

[Emrick]

I used to think that it's only in soap operas where men fall in love.I fell in love once and i wasn't sure if i was doing the right thing because all my friends were telling me that that's not a thing for men. To be real,your poems have taught a lot of things.
You are like a teacher to me now.
God bless you!.

[Tate Morgan]

You friends are wrong and fools as well as they will find in years to come lol Lead don't follow my friend

[Tomi]

Wow! this is soooo beautiful, so sweet, loving, tender...convincing love..just beautiful!