The Secret

A Dream

Becky

Happy 14th Anniversary.

 

I dreamed three words within my mind

that longed to touch her heart
Each a third of the love
I had felt for her from the start

I'd hid these words I'd treasured so
praying they would only heed
But needing love they wanted out
to touch the soul they'd freed

So now at last I let them fly
as all would freely do
That she might know the first be I
the others Love and You

Tate

                     

Author's Note

The answer to all who seek it. The eternal valentine !!

Reviews

[Magdelena]

This was stunning! I saw so much in you piece that I felt as if i were reading one of my own. To hide behind ourselves, as I know many of us do, including I! Then to suddenly feel that freedom to come forth and speak of what is in our hearts is a feeling of re-birth. Like being a child again and finding their first joy in life and running with it.. That's what I saw in your piece. The feelings of 'at last I am free'


Fantastic!


Magdelena xx

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Congrats once again on this great winning poem. Well Done!

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Beautiful Tate, just beautiful!!! Congrats on your winning poem!

[DBURKE]

You have a way with words (sweet and simple) yet heavy and powerful- great write thank you for sharing!

[Aditya Unni]

wow,

[Deeksha]

Wonderful!

Loved it. :)

Good luck in my contest. :)

[Helena]

Can't believe I missed this one first time around. I'm glad I finally caught up to review it. Amazing poetry. The flow was wonderful and I thoroughly enjoyed this. A wonderful Valentine's poem Tate. Thanks for submitting this beauty to my contest! ~ Helena

[Seashell]

So lovely and straight from the heart to the lucky love of your life.
Short but full of passionate feelings.
Thanks for share

Babs xx

[Stacy]

I really enjoyed this piece of writing.

[LJW]

So simple, so precise, so profound, so sweet.

Your best in my opinion.

[Alexandria]

awwww this has meaning truely.
so sweet and loving, wanting to express that moment
and freez it so it will never pass
great job hun