Bottle of Rain

Bottle of Rain

A Poem by Tate Morgan
"

The end of one love is the beginning of another.

"




I've come to bury the last of love

beneath this willow tree

In the deep forest I went

where no one else could see

___________________________

Held within this bottle of rain

are the tears I cried for her

The many nights I couldn't sleep

as I dreamed of how we were

___________________________

I'll place on it no pictures

spin thrice to forget the way

Save in me the pain she flowered

leave the dark for light of day

___________________________

I'll never visit her again

forever play all day in the sun

But night when no one else is there

I'll cry of her as the one

 

Tate





 

© 2018 Tate Morgan


Author's Note

Tate Morgan
Yes Virginia I must have a heart. I think it's broken

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Such quiet and sorrowful pictures you paint. I feel as if I walk through your pain with you and feel the breeze within the willow you buried her under. Such a shattered heart makes everything so quiet, no? Such a strong piece, with the focus of a single journey, as a tear from eye to ground. I weep with you.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Wow.. this was amazing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Bottle of rain, your work has done for me what I could not do myself.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Very ad. But yes, it is legend that you must bury your love in the wood.

Posted 7 Years Ago


gracious me....you wanted to depress me...or enlighten me?

Posted 8 Years Ago


That part of life that lives on even after all the memorials are held. No matter what else we have that we deem important, the loss is still important enough to attribute a poem!

Posted 8 Years Ago


This poem is sorrow put to words. Each line speaks of the pain a broken heart can bring to the one who suffers. Each person has to deal with heartbreak, but sometimes it feels like your whole body is broken. It's a great read, beautiful.

Posted 8 Years Ago


good way to put it I mean the title, love it.
great job, well done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Great write my friend. Very sorrow and pain. You picturised your emotions and feelings. Great.

Posted 8 Years Ago


What an absolutely amazing poem. You pen beautifully.



100/100

Posted 8 Years Ago


Such quiet and sorrowful pictures you paint. I feel as if I walk through your pain with you and feel the breeze within the willow you buried her under. Such a shattered heart makes everything so quiet, no? Such a strong piece, with the focus of a single journey, as a tear from eye to ground. I weep with you.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on August 11, 2009
Last Updated on September 17, 2018
Tags: poetry, Life, Sad, adventure, mystery, pain, poem, romance, story, death, fantasy, fiction, heart, love

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Tate Morgan
Tate Morgan

Marion , OH



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