The Roots Of Love

I am the roots, You are the tree.

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"OMG I can't believe you added that picture lol"
Tate's Poem is hanging in the background.

Author's Note

This I wrote to my daughter on her last night as a child.The night before she left for college

Reviews

[RainyDay]

Man, this is gorgeous! So full of loveliness! A resounding awwwh could be heard as the poem ended. What wonderful evoking of emotion-what a way to convey such an over-conveyed feeling!
And as usual your perfect flow and rhyme only helped your message through the minds (and hearts!) of your readers. I don't doubt that I'll return to read this poem again just to feel the beauty of it...

Really, thank you.

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

I choose to be the weeping willow or weeping cherry myself. DELIGHTFUL and so sweetly delicate. Going in my favs. for sure. Thank you.
Love and Light,
SiddARTha

[Liza]

what a great father....to confirm to her child that her foundation of love, support and security is rooted within you....awwwww! my heart smiles.

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

Great imagrey, a beautiful poem for sure. It was short, yet strong. Thanks for sharing.

[harman kour]

one of ur best writes i feel... The idea of Roots and Trees was the overpowering!!! This is the best thing u cud hav done 4 ur daughter... God Bless :)

[ICE]

This is a wonderful piece! Its really sweet.

[Aggie Skeleton]

Wow, that is very appropriate for moving on to college. I liked it.

[Kayla_May]

sweet

[Ladysue]

I absolutely adore this. So precious. I remember mine going to college. A beautiful piece that says so much. Wonderfully written...

[G. Marie"floating on an..]

A VERY sweet sentiment I wish i had wrote that for my daughter as I felt the same emotions when she left and moved out on her own. It's so sad for us but alas you have to let them go that's life! imagine how our parents must have felt! now I understand. I really like this poem.

[Liz Alexander]

I knew right when I hit the "I am the roots, you are the tree" That this was a parent talking to thier child. Even though I am still a child myself, I k it is true. One of your best the love and emotion flows and leaps off the page.