Not Forgotten

 

I thought I had forgotten

what with spring came back to me

Words un-uttered thoughts we stirred

of the way things use to be

 

I remember the dark door

where we hid from all the rain

A dry respite from the storm

safe in arms I'd felt no pain

 

I went back to the small doorway

where happily our loves had played

My heart ached for what could have been

if behind that door we had stayed

 

With wild, spring, rain and thunder

something wondrous comes this way

Your eyes had said more that night

than your lips could ever say

 

Author's Note

Sometimes the thoughts of the mind take me back to times that seem like yesterday. However the day has set on those times and the new day risen on better ones.
This is a poem set to a 7 syllable count in the meter. It has a simple A.B.C.B. rhyme scheme. The 2nd line of each quatrain rhymes with the 4th.

Reviews

[Robbie~xoxo~]

WOW Tater Tot... This has left me breathless!
I am truly surprised by the passion in your words! OH MY! :D
Now this is worth reading over and over again, it makes the heart race...such palpable yearning etched between the lines...Lovely write!~xoxo~:)

[Tate Morgan]

Truly this is as good as my romantic heart can get

[Barbz]

Why is someone else using my pic? Barbz......not my review

[Tate Morgan]

Your humor is showing today barbz

[Barbz]

Sorry about this Tate, I wasn't trying to be humorous, merely curious. I went to this site to read this work last nite and tried to review it , but wasn't able. I scrolled down and saw my pic and a review.....however their was a different name under my pic with a review that I didn't write. I see that it's gone this morn....some sort of a snag, I assume........Barbz

[Barbz]

Just noticed, it was LadyAnn68....her pic is on it now. Glitch! Not a problem...

[Tate Morgan]

we do have gliches here like that

[Subjective Sanity]

Another one I can relate to. Beautiful! They say the 'What if's' can kill you but, it's hard to let them go. Very well expressed!

[Wicahpi]

Eyes tell many things that smiles do not, for sometime smiles
are painted on; eyes don't tell lies.

Nicely done

[MagiCrystal]

When a kiss is from the heart.. we feel so safe.. we hide to kiss.. and we find to long day in and night for that kiss, Secrets are those kisses that taste so sweet when we give out kisses to love.
The magical eyes are amazing in this poem of love. to embrace that love..and the rain to me is that making love.. in a secret place.
Moments in wich we get lost .. inside that embrace.. is enticing and we long for more of that moment make of silk..
You have done it again... wow

[Orahemae December]

wow. that was great. you could really feel emotions flowing from this piece, nice write

[Tommy]

I like this piece, it speaks of love lost and hearts broke, but with as season changes becoming healed again. Hence the thawing spring's sun has returned. The heart may heal, but I feel that it is destined to remember the places, "Where happily our loves had played."

RLG,
Tommy

[Faelyn ó Cuilinn]

Seo déanta tremble dom agus mo glúine's. An paisean ndáiríre ní leap as an leathanach le gradeur spreagúil sin nach féidir liom a chur in iúl conas a mhothaíonn sé i ndáiríre dom. Ghabh tú mo chroí agus rinneadh smaoineamh mé. You are fíor file an ancients. You have a mhaolú den sórt sin le focail. Den sórt sin píosa stiúdú!

Faelyn

[QuietPoet]

This was beautiful and heart wrenching. I enjoyed the read. Very deep and passionate. Nice job. I like the picture you used.

[Lilly]

Incredibly beautiful - the eyes most definetly are the window to the soul - powerful piece -great imagery

[little lily Bride of Ch..]

Beautiful piece Very passionate and romantic i Love love so i fell in love with this Nicce work. loved these lines
With wild, spring, rain, and thunder;
Something wondrous comes this way.
Your eyes had said more that night;
Than your lips could ever say.


This is going on the Shelf i am Saving this poem