This is beautiful.
Also I like that many of your poems are compact enough I can read them, get something out of them, and not feel bad for interrupting my homework.
Also, I'm going to drop this related Byron poem.
"They say that hope is happiness,
But genuine love must prize the past,
And mem'ry wakes the thoughts that bless,
They rose the first, they set the last,
And all that memory loves the most,
Was once our only hope to be,
And all that Love adored and Lost,
Hath faded into memory.
Alas! It is delusion all!
The Future cheats us from afar,
Nor can we be what we recall,
Nor dare we think on what we are..."
Except I added the dot-dot-dots, because I feel like that's how he would've let the moment land.
"To pipe these two words lightly" .. what are the 'two words' mentioned in here ??
the ending was a bit abrupt and there is a typo in 'shining' . not the best of your writes cause i have raised the ante for you . a good write nonetheless.
Oh, is this your epitaph? Beautifuly penned, Tate as always. You have such a strength to your voice which is both uplifting and inspiring. Thank, just, thank you!
Light,
Siddartha
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