Worthy of My Friends

Through path and switch with company skipping along the winding road I pass food and accompany with he whom life seldom bestowed

Dave and Jason

To walk the roads of soul strewn streets

with all thoughts we know of living

Leaves us lonesome for others feats

finds sharing to come from giving

 

Through path with switch and company

skipping along the winding road

I pass food and accompany

with he whom life seldom bestowed

 

In those who share my few comforts

won't you join me in life's amends

For as long as I walk this earth

may I be worthy of my friends

Reviews

[EMW]

LIke usual I love it.

[Nayan]

This is really an wise poem, rich in philosophy learnt from your experiences in life!

These lines are jewels:

"finds sharing to be in giving"

"For as long as I walk this earth
may I be worthy of my friends"

Thanks for sharing!

Cheers...

[Jasmine]

once again a clever and great poem

[Ladysue]

Your opening sentence, in fact, that whole verse is remarkable. The words spoken here are beautiful with a wonderfully pleasant flow. Your son is lucky to have you.

[profile deleted]

my heart cries daily that my son & daughter would have the chance to have a dad again.. One day soon they will. as long as my heart cries it will happen because in the crying i am making my kids heart cries happen. Thanks Tate for this poem. You are a great man & poet.

[Poetic Beauty]

the flow of this poem is easy to follow as always. the words are beautiful and ones that we should live by. I love the last stanza and the last line as well.

[Charles]

You certainly are worthy of your friends if your poetry is any measure... your son is lucky to have a dad who is involved in every way with his life. :-)

[Julijana Velichkovska]

it is beautiful... the idea, the writing... mature and wize...

[writing_for_you]

I liked it. I could feel the emotions when reading it. I think this is really good.

[Ryan Falzon - Tymon]

beautifully written. It's true we're happy when we are able to help other people. I especially loved the last two lines, where you doubt if your worthy of the friends you have. Excellent piece of work.