The Long and Winding Road

Emotion so bare and open fearing no more of the night Said come back again and again stay with me till morning light

Rebecca

Oh so fragrant the air was tasted

when first our souls did meet

Wafting on to the fading night

spoke of smells so ever sweet

 

Emotions so bare and open

fearing no more of the night

Say come back again and again

stay with me till morning light

 

Thirst overpowers my senses

with promises of love each day

Saying to drink of your fountain

swearing you'll show me the way

 

So short the time we have to be

oh what shall I do with mine

Give of my heart to another

or simply drink of the wine

 

I'll trust in you my happiness

life seldom gives but just one turn

while knowing so well the danger

I still wish to live, love and learn

 

Tate

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Author's Note

Sometimes love is in the first sight! This was written for Rebecca. Seldom do the paths of dreams and reality meet .Rebecca is one of those.

Reviews

[TAO]

Maybe. This is a very hopeful piece, Tate Morgan. Nice work.

[Rain Kissed Secret]

I liked it. It was positive (not that negative is a bad thing) It was inspirational and it made me want to pick myself up by my boot strings and get on to the next part of my life.
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[Poetic Beauty]

I have to agree with you that sometimes love is at first sight. I have only felt this once in my lifetime but it was amazing while it last. This poem describes how it is to be drunk in love and want to be with that person for hours and hours for they make you feel complete. You have written a great piece capturing those glorious moments.

[Kaite Seckinger]

This completely captivated me in every sense. Amazing.

[Bridget Mcmaken]

beautiful poem!! very well written!! it flows nicely, just awesome work! I love this

[Tina Kline]

Very romantic and hopeful. Love at first sight, if it is for real and you know if it lasts, well, what could be more wonderful? Fantastic write.

[Marie Harrison]

I believe in love a first sight. I love this song, the poem and the picture. Wonderful job.

[Sarah McConnaughey]

So beautifully romantic!!! Thank you so much for sharing your wonderful poem with me! I enjoyed it very much. :)

[The Analog Kid]

This is the kind of "love" poem I like. You made your point, but no mush. I thought the flow in this one was exceptional.

[Eileen]

I miss this feeling. I've never expirenced love at first sight though. I like it very much though.