I Am

I am loving and caring

I wonder if there’s such a thing as a happy ending

I hear the tears of my heart

I see the life I’ve always wanted

I want to actually be loved

I am loving and caring

 

I pretend I’m an angel

I feel my teddy bear’s hugs

I touch the soft clouds in the sky

I worry about losing the people I care about the most

I cry when I think about the pain I’ve been through

I am loving and caring

 

I understand I can never redo my past

I say that life is an unexpected journey

I dream about being with the person I love the most

I try not to let the pain and hurt ruin my future

I hope that I can finally be happy one day

I am loving and caring

Reviews

[Immortal1967]

Great job on this. Life is a series of ups and downs. Its learning and loving through them all that makes you the person you are.

[Sean M. Addams]

very nice ..liked the emotions displayed throughout this piece... overall great job on this

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a heartfelt truly open write into who you are deep inside. We all want to find that some one special and to be loved by that person. this is a great insight to who you are.

[vincentbals]

very deep... i'm sure hapiness will cross your way soon... well done

[deeps]

this is deep, and very well written. I like the emotions you have poured out.

[TAO]

As you see it, and truly want it, so shall it be.

I like this... It's...endearing...cute... Even though it's a little sad, I feel all warm and fuzzy inside reading it, like wishing for Christmas, fearing it won't come this year, and finally being surprised by a very large man in a red suit struggling to come down the chimney to leave me presents and eat my cookies and drink my milk and kiss my mother... Okay, maybe not exactly like that...but...

...outstanding piece of work.

[al25]

Well written. Makes you sound like your very frustrated. The repitition also gives the poem all the more effect. Good job.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

When something comes from your heart and soul then it is always your best much like this wonderful piece. The second stanza is my fav.

[Dark Lady Phoenix]

very nice hun!

[Short.Nerd]

Wow.. This is great (-: Shows a lot of feeling! good job!