Questioning

Questioning

A Poem by Amila Jay
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14/07/12

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Something is not right these days

My mind is going insane

Troubles and troubles

Yells and yells

And reasoning to myself

I walk like dead scarecrow dug out of its grave

Holding a light over my head

Before I fall and a break a leg

© 2012 Amila Jay


Author's Note

Amila Jay
The last line was originally *Cause I might fall and break a leg* but I changed it to *Before I fall and break a leg*
Just pondering to myself again with all the stress at work and just decided to jot this down. Your comments are appreciated :))

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everyone feels like that once in a while.. I have been going through it just recently! A very well expressed poem. I love the third line from the bottom. Well done!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amila Jay

11 Years Ago

Thanks for the review :-D

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Amila Jay
Amila Jay

Kandy, Sri Lanka



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