Let it be

Let it be

A Poem by Kimberly "Melody" Carney

 

majucal world

What does it mean to free one’s mind?

To truly let it go,

no more burdens, thoughts unclear,

finally free to grow.

How we limit ourselves, our minds

With guilt, worry and fear.

Here’s a tangible solution,

the answer is quite clear.

Now open the doors to your mind

and let it just run free.

At first it will run oh so wild,

relax and let it be.

As time runs on, it will run down

and rest contentedly

A mind is like a beast of sorts,

it truly must be free

So sit back and relax my friend.

Just try and let it be.

Understanding comes from trying.

Trust me, you wait and see.

 

~Melody

 

 

© 2012 Kimberly "Melody" Carney


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Most excellent thoughts, Melody..Finding freedom can be complex because it is not always as it seems. Don't wish to taint the positiveness of an inspirational message in your fine poem. as your words say it all...Thanks for a great read to start my day...

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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The thought is cool, even philosophical, the music fits extremely well with the text, but if you allow me to be honest ... I can't feel it as a poem ! For me it looks like a sophisticated yoga trainer's guide, sorry :(

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

外人 (Gaijin)

11 Years Ago

Please don't hate me for that ! I hate to point bad aspects :(
Kimberly "Melody" Carney

11 Years Ago

I am never offended my friend, Your opinion is your voice and when spoken should never be regretted... read more
Kimberly "Melody" Carney

11 Years Ago

and by the way, if we get offended by pure honesty...we shouldn't be on this site. I loved your revi.. read more
Great flow in this poem. Interesting imagery for the topic of letting the mind run free. This is a unique piece, while there have been many poems about freeing you mind I can't recall one that was done like this. Good write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You are exactly right with this poems, and such a lovely way to tell people to cast their worries aside and like the mind free. Great job. 100/100

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i am glad that i stumbled upon this write . The trials and tribulations that are described are something that i am going through these days. There is no semblance of deviation from the truth, howsoever harsh it might be. Keep writing !


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very well said! the mind is one thing that can make your life either beautiful or ugly.. just let it go free and it will make your life free of all the bindings.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very good. I like the way this illustrates letting go of the chains that bind us.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Good thoughts are being expressed by your poem. You have rose-up deep meaning here. I liked the tile of this poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tremendous! the music goes with it superbly. Well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Excellent piece of art! It flowed rhythmic just like the music of 'Clocks'! It's true, it's a fact! It's self, it's all that occurs to be current!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your details of the mind are so clever and...spot on I guess is what I want to say. O_O But even after saying that I cannot impress upon you how much I enjoyed reading this.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Kimberly "Melody" Carney
Kimberly "Melody" Carney

Denver, CO



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