Let it be

 

What does it mean to free one’s mind?

To truly let it go,

no more burdens, thoughts unclear,

finally free to grow.

How we limit ourselves, our minds

With guilt, worry and fear.

Here’s a tangible solution,

the answer is quite clear.

Now open the doors to your mind

and let it just run free.

At first it will run oh so wild,

relax and let it be.

As time runs on, it will run down

and rest contentedly

A mind is like a beast of sorts,

it truly must be free

So sit back and relax my friend.

Just try and let it be.

Understanding comes from trying.

Trust me, you wait and see.

 

~Melody

 

 

Reviews

[rivers]

Most excellent thoughts, Melody..Finding freedom can be complex because it is not always as it seems. Don't wish to taint the positiveness of an inspirational message in your fine poem. as your words say it all...Thanks for a great read to start my day...

[afra]

beautiful ...amazing

[Tate Morgan]

Oh this is very good Your best so far

[Kimberly "Melody" Carney]

I had an incredible friend take the time to teach me.

[Pax]

beautiful

[stars are far]

Great work .

[Ben Ashelford]

superb this. loved every single line. thank you!

[Sean]

I love the concept. A great poem. Very poignant message. Simple, clean and yet precise and abstract.

[~LadyWolf~]

Again, an amazing poem!! love it :)

[marytownsend]

Getting to that place where worldly cares fade away and our mind can soar free is a goal I think we all seek. I enjoyed this very much and the music compliments it well!

Great poem dear, again with healing powers, and your strength and wisdom overall!
Amazing insight as always.

E.L.

[Bare trees]

Great poem and the music really compliments your words so nicely.