Ecstasy in Twilight

The state between consciousness and dreams

Breathing in darkness,

My lids, they flitter.

Stars begin careening,

Burnishing gray,

Welcoming me back

To the gloaming cafe.

My mind starts whispering,

Opening to tranquillity,

Speaking of days happenings

And the sensation of it all.

But an aqueous like rapture

Sings lullabies within,

Dusting the gallery with silence.

My ears are tingling,

Absorbing soothing vibrations.

The whistle of the wind,

The churning of my fan,

They tingle at the serenity,

At the circumambient reclusion.

My body, it’s immersing

To the integument beneath.

I’m melting into the platform,

Becoming one with the world.

I’m soaring on darkness,

Meandering between galaxies.

I’m floating above reality

And drifting towards oblivion.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Malister Mikey]

I really liked this piece you had a good word flow and kept my interest from start to finish. You captured the state between consciousness and dreams quite well. Good Job

[Briana O'Connor]

thank you very much :D

[Sami Khalil]

"But an aqueous like rapture
Sings lullabies within,
Dusting the gallery with silence."

Beautifully written and lovely as the stars of the night. Bravo.................

[Briana O'Connor]

Thank you :D

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).....

[Rana]

Beautiful. Gives a new meaning and adds much loveliness to such a normal act as that of falling asleep. So much is felt, so much happens.. Just wow.

[Briana O'Connor]

Thank you :D

[hardeep sabharwal]

very nicely written,, imagery is good,, words and expression is perfect,, good job :)

[Briana O'Connor]

Thank you :D

[Parimal Pratyush]

This is a brilliant write. We rarely find moments when we can be one with the universe. But those who believe in All is One, tend to experience such moments more often. Breathtaking imagery and impressive diction. Great write, ma'am.

[Briana O'Connor]

thank you so much :D