A Poem by Naomi Roseღ

She cried so many times
in her life.

She gave up on love
when everything died.

But then she got back 
on her feet.

Decided to fight the war
that had won many times

She cried.

She bled.

But it all worked

She is a fighter.

She is loud.

She is beautiful.

You may call her

You may think she
is a murderer.

But to me, she is one
of the strongest women
in the world.

Thank you, Alice.

© 2011 Naomi Roseღ

Author's Note

Naomi Roseღ
Jesus, this is the cheesiest thing ever...
But fuck it, I wanna be cheesy!
I love you, Alice!!

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Alice... I remember her. I agree with your poem, even if you think it's cheesy. Not everyone can understand any of this, I can certaintly understand part of it though. Not every write needs to be a masterpiece, it's about getting the point across. And this certaintly does.

Posted 9 Years Ago

good write the power of this persona comes through

Posted 9 Years Ago

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i think it is great...don't know what makes is how you feel and you leave your true heart in your words.

Posted 9 Years Ago

Alice sounds great. I think you did an awesome job. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago

Ah... Alice. Love her. This was great. I loved it.

Posted 9 Years Ago

I think that this is really sweet :] you did a great job with it.

Posted 9 Years Ago

Alice sounds epic.

Posted 9 Years Ago

Wowza! Well done!

Posted 9 Years Ago

alice....sounds like a wonderful person you really care about. i like it [:

Posted 9 Years Ago

Smerhgen [email protected]!!!! thiaaaas is GRATTEEE alice sunds likk a nivker gorll

Posted 9 Years Ago

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