Introduction 2

Introduction 2

A Chapter by b!tchgirl1618

Introduction #2

This diary belongs to Sierra Donahue. She is 16 years old. She has dyed black hair and green eyes as well as a perfect hour-glass figure. She is 5’6

This is Shelby. She is 15. She has long blond hair and blue eyes and is 5’5.

Meet George Foster. He is 17 with short dark brown hair and green eyes, he is 6’3.

Say hello to our killer. He doesn’t get a description because we want that to be a surprise.

Meet Amelia. She is 5’7 with short dark brown hair and green eyes. She has a perfect body and she is 14.

Hello Miss Ana. Ana is 14, blond with brown eyes and is 5’0.



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I like that you explained the characters. :) A recommendation though When it comes to the characters, it might be good to make one of the characters a little more plain (Maybe Ana or Shelby?) or of a different body type? Cause when you have differences between your characters readers tend to notice that more, and it also makes your main female lead stand out a little more! :)

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