Gone Beyond Saving

Eyes as clear as glass and a heart as cold as stone.

 How could you ever expect to be loved?

You're too far gone for a girl with good intentions to save.

 

Perhaps one day someone will be strong enough to be your savior.

To lift you out of the hole you've been in.

 

For a girl with hopless desires, shes given up.

 You feel as if you were abandoned, but how could this be?

When you never gave her a reason to hold on.

 Constantly pushing her away has caused too mush pain for her heart to bear.

 

Years later when you see her again, you notice in her eyes the hurt and guilt laid upon her.

However, you still see she never truely gave up on a man too far gone to save.

 

Reviews

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dont you just hate people who try and lay guilt upon you...like this piece. well done!

[Dareen]

Really nice. I liked the meaning and idea more than the layout, though. Still, good writing that really affects.