Tick, tock.

Tick, tock.

A Poem by Sami

Disaster awaits me as I listen to the clock.

Tick ,tock, tick, tock.

A constant reminder that time will never stop.

Tick, tock, tick, tock.

In a silent room I hear my heart as if it was insync with the clock.

Tick, thump, tock, thump.

Anxeity is getting to me.

Tick, tock, thump, thump.

My heart rate increases.

Thump thump thump.

It's time to face this, there's no going back now.

Tick, tock.

The room is hushed...

© 2010 Sami


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makes you feel it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love this, i love the tick tock repeated words.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Great! i really love the onomatopoeias!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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