Love.

Love.

A Poem by bathtime

It starts slow
A gradual build up of warm and fuzzy
The overwhelming feeling of joy
Extends over your whole body
Wrapping the ends of your fingers
A need for contact develops
An uncontrollable feeling of lust
You've found your ultimate, your one
And you can't just let go.
The feeling gets stronger
Until it overwhelms your brain
Controlling your thoughts and weaknesses
Exposing you to that one
Vulnerable, yet willing
Love, in its greatest form.

© 2015 bathtime


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Pretty accurate depiction of love, the emotions develop and develop. You seem to be in the happy, jolly phase but there is a dark side too. I hope you don't ever have to write about that side though.
Good uplifting poem :D

Posted 8 Years Ago


bathtime

8 Years Ago

I have been through the darker side of love. Within my relationship, even. I'm just in a good place .. read more
Hakim

8 Years Ago

Oh i see, good for you though and your welcome ;)

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