Comatose

June 8, 2012

One moment here
The next I’m gone
I am comatose

You cry over me
And beg for my awakening
But I’m too far away

Disappeared for awhile
So that everything
Can work itself out

Restore my faith
Solve my love life
Fix my family

I’m loving the peace
Relaxing with no stress
But I suppose I should go back

Awake I lay
Bright lights and noise
Fill my skull

I see all of you
Family, friends, doctors
And I do my checks

Faith is still shot
Love still a mess
And family still broken

My hopes are failed
Disappearing didn’t help
But at least I had some peace

Reviews

[Dr. Wood ?]

poetry does that....It opens you up.....This is very sad but the last line is the killer