I saw the sun today

I saw the sun today

A Poem by beauitifulybroken

 I saw the sun today

when i arose from my bed

and peered out the window

the sky didn’t look so gray

i didn’t seem to realize how muted the colours had become

until the beautiful rays of colour hit me

with the warm heat of the sun

i had been accompanied by a rain cloud

soaking me through to the bone

with tears shed on my cheeks

but now i sit and cry, revelling in my quiet joy

i see the bright colours or purple, pink and orange

the sun rises from the horizon

I didn’t seem to notice how weighed down i had become

my life was void of colour

with shades of black and grey

the little rain cloud has seemed to disappear for now

although i know some days it will be return

but in the end I know I’ll be okay

because i saw the sun today



 

                          

© 2024 beauitifulybroken


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Beautiful work with splendid imagery.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Bursting with imagery, great word choices.
Calls to mind someone's daily struggle with depression, and their hopeful moments for sunnier days.

Posted 2 Months Ago


beauitifulybroken

2 Months Ago

Thank you for the kind review. I'm glad that it resonated with you.
Anita Frader

2 Months Ago

You're welcome 😊

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beauitifulybroken
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Inside there is a soul that is yearning to be heard,felt and seen. Letting my self express these thoughts and words help for that soul to feel a little less alone. more..

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