Men!!! HmmmF!

Men!!! HmmmF!

A Poem by .::Cup^E^Cake*RaWr!*::.
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Boys confuse me sooo much!

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I can't understand

what goes on in his head

let alone why he does

what he does to me.

 

What are his motives

with her?

Better yet

what are his motives

with me?

 

When he says love

I feel as if he's talking about me

deep down inside somewhere

but I'm really not sure.

Does he love me?

 

When he says forever.

I wonder what he sees in his forever.

Does he see me?

Does he see us?

Oh why can't this be more clear.

 

Why are men so different.

This would be much easier

if we thought a little more similar.

© 2008 .::Cup^E^Cake*RaWr!*::.


Author's Note

.::Cup^E^Cake*RaWr!*::.
Nothing's perfect,Don't be too harsh please.

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cute poem. the ever ongoing battle of men vs women. women spend too much time analyzing men, when in my opinion, men are not complicated, but so insanely stupidly (not meant to be an insult men so no hate emails please) simple we cannot even grasp. this poem expresses your emotions of bewilderment and confusion well. i wouldn't waste too much time analyzing it though :) creative, well written.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Men are rough, but so are women! :P You captured the confusion each gender has for the other really well with this, good job on the poem.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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.::Cup^E^Cake*RaWr!*::.
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My Name is Rebekah but everyone calls me Beck or Beckah or my fav Cup^E^Cake & I was born in Ohio but Raised in the south. My poems are about things that really happend some where in my life weather .. more..

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