The Things I Miss

The Things I Miss

A Poem by twilight-dreamer-24/7
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this is a poem i wrote for a boy I was having relationship issues with. Of course we moved on and now he is just in my memory

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The Things I Miss

 

I know I can't be trusted and I have done you wrong

The things I did to lead you on and drag you along.

I know I have made mistakes like this before

Leaving your heart broken, bruised, bleeding, and tore.

I never should have done you this way

In the end it is really me who pays

But now here is what I needed to say..

 

The things I miss about you are...
The company of you there when no one else cared

The way you held me when I was scared.

The way you used to look at me and say

Baby, everything will be okay.

The way your hugs held me so close,

And how you loved me no matter what I chose.

The way you kissed me when everything was right,

And how you said with you Baby my future looks bright.

The way you accepted me despite my past,

And you respecting me when I said this is too fast.

 

These are just some of the great things I miss,

If I had enough paper, there would be a never ending list. 

 

I am sorry that I treated you the way I did,

It was my stupidity, I let everyone else direct me in

What I should do and what I wanted.

Im saying to you right now that I am sorry

from the bottom of my heart

maybe someday and and somehow we can restart.

Please hear what I am saying and accept my apology,

So you and I can fially be happy.

 

One last statement before I go, just to let you know.

I loved you once and I love you still,

I always have and I always will.

 

© 2010 twilight-dreamer-24/7


Author's Note

twilight-dreamer-24/7
this is for an ex of mine that left me a while back when he got expelled from school and I haven't spoken to him in a while. I gave him this poem but he never read it so yea. I thought I would post it up because some people feel this way also. Thanks for reading it!!!!

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TLK
"Fially".

The use of 'tore' at the end of a sentence rings false to me. Torn would be better.



Posted 7 Years Ago


Awwww WOW!!!

That is like the sweetest and most dear thing anyone has ever written !!!
WoW!!! That touched my heart and was so dear and filled with such emotion and such pain and such desire to be together once again!!! WoW!!! I hope you and your ex can make it work once again =D
WoW!!! That was amazing!!! What a beautiful, marvelous way of expressing how you feel!!!!!!!! WoW!!!


PERFECT!!!!

Posted 10 Years Ago



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twilight-dreamer-24/7

Enterprise, KS



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