All of me

You...

You left me!

You took all of me with you.

My heart...

My soul

You are gone

And I can't bring you back

You're gone forever...

They are gone forever

I look back...

At my past

And realized I had something

I had a mother!

I know you loved me

I just didn't see

I was blind

You never showed

I thought you didn't care about me

But now you're gone

I can't correct what I've done to you

And I will never get you back

You left and took all of me with you.

Reviews

[J. R.]

Love can either be the most wonderful feeling or the most unendurable pain. Great poem

[Jazique]

How sad you must always live today like your last day and forgive your enmies so when you or someone else dies theirs no regrets. nice job.

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

Very lovely and sad!

[Kaitlyn]

i know how you feel... I love this poem...

[RJM]

We should always cherish all the moments we have with are loved ones no matter how small. Great write and the feeling is just tragic.

[Dream Weaver]

Losing a loved one and not being able to reconnect
is very tragic...I've know this feeling as well...

[HopelesslyDevoted]

i know how that feels, sad but i guess when we give ourselves to people, we can't always take it back when they leave