Up the Creek

Up the Creek

A Poem by bigfootprint
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Faith looks to mercies rife

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Here I am, 77 next week, 
Oarless and up the creek 
To tread floodtide of life. 

Both stupider and wiser now -- 
Still till with a dull plow, 
Plant among clods of strife. 

One truth sure and certain -- 
Lifts that fateful curtain,
Foisted on my own knife. 

We sow, reap and brew up 
A potion to fill our cup 
To toast murky afterlife. 

Sweet or bitter we devour 
Our life's wine that hour, 
Leave to mourn friends and wife. 

Braced to face my maker, 
Like shaman, friar, fakir, 
Faith looks to mercies rife. 

© 2018 bigfootprint


Author's Note

bigfootprint
When our own story nears the final chapter, we can only wax philosophical.

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A fantastic summary of life processes and culmination set in the background of the worthy author's routine. What impresses is the flow in the scheme that strikes a special note in the mind of the reader. Believe me, the meaning gets deeper each time I read the verses.
I shall keep looking out for more from the author.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

bigfootprint

5 Years Ago

Thanks for the flowers. The fun -- and therapy -- is in the writing, but it is also fulfilling to sh.. read more



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A fantastic summary of life processes and culmination set in the background of the worthy author's routine. What impresses is the flow in the scheme that strikes a special note in the mind of the reader. Believe me, the meaning gets deeper each time I read the verses.
I shall keep looking out for more from the author.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

bigfootprint

5 Years Ago

Thanks for the flowers. The fun -- and therapy -- is in the writing, but it is also fulfilling to sh.. read more
Now, Doug, this was wise, insightful, fun even. As well as good use of tongue in cheek humour sprinkled inside this gem of a poem.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 11, 2018
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Tags: Philosophy, age, irony, growth

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bigfootprint
bigfootprint

Bossier City, LA



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Hi I'm Doug Fowler, age 77, proud American. Perpetual student, newspaper copy editor (retired), poet, novelist, painter, Christian minister, USAF veteran, and pool player. I live alone and like it (bu.. more..

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