Surrender

Such love as the blind-god knows

In your eyes you cannot hide

Never, oh, never gaze at me

To surrender to your eyes is not surrender

It is fire.

Reviews

[KAin]

The quickening of the heart to passion is both fury and surrender, consigned to the flame, as the heart thunders within one's breast. To feel the heat and agony of true love and how it flails - an agonizing flame -across the empty in-between spaces, stoked into radiance made gentle again by the soft words of a lover. Passion embodied in but a few words, Belle. As exceptional as always.

[Belle]

This was the first confession I made... ;)

[KAin]

And you've managed to make it both gentle and passionate... Perfect words, i think...

[Belle]

You understood, thank you, endlessly...

[KAin]

... Thank you, Belle, for sharing this with us... Hope i can find the perfect words too, one day.

[Belle]

My Landred, you have found the perfect words, you have even tamed the un-tamable because of your words. Com'on you do not need me to tap you to realize that...

[KAin]

Ah... You do me too much honour. But i must keep striving for something truly worthy... Some things are worth bettering yourself for, every day, every moment.

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing use of words. A complete poem is so few words. Good visions and thoughts create by the outstanding poetry. Some people can set us on fire in heart and mind by a smile or gentle touch.
Coyote

[Belle]

Fire can burn us by its potent flame, but it can be a light in every dark and a warmth in every winter...Thank you Sir for coming by.

[Sami Khalil]

Eyes are giving away a lot of clues of great impresions of love and passion. Those eyes can tell us so many things. Surrender demands unconditional devotion...Excellent...:)..................

[Belle]

Eyes is the mirror of every soul's truth... :)

[Sami Khalil]

So true. You are welcome...:)...............