Love Me

...all I want is your love in return...

 

I’ve never felt this way before,

You cause sensations I adore,

You’re like a star that’s burning just for me.

You’re all I have, the air I breathe,

You stole my heart, a pleasing thieve,

And though you’ve left me poor, I love you baby.

 

I love you baby.

 

It’s possible you’ll never know,

I can’t pretend I always show,

How lost I’d be if you ever chose to leave.

I’d be like a fire without a flame,

A missing child without a name,

With only breath to scream, ‘I love you baby.’

 

I love you baby.

 

If all I ever learn from you,

Is only that you need me too,

Then I pray we never have to be apart.

You are the light that shines in me,

You’re all that I wish I could be,

But I’ll be alright if you say you love me baby.

 

Love me baby.

Reviews

[Forest Green]

Sincere thoughts like this will strike many a pursuer dumb...but it's a happy dumbness...;)

Nice work Princess.

Looking forward to future submissions.

Forest Green

[smiggle wiggle]

Great job! I like the feeling I get from this poem! An exquisite poem indeed... ^_^

[T.B. Odin]

Well written, definite, and romantic. Exquisite for such a young writer.

[Lea Jane]

I'm pleased to announce that I gave it to him for Christmas and for the first time since I've met him he was speechless. ;)

[Tania Leigh]

He will cherish every word written by you :-)

Nice write, very sweet

[Beth]

It's definitely well-written. I can't say if you should give it to him or not - that's totally up to you :)

Good job.

[Lea Jane]

I know it's short, but I rather like it. I'm contemplating giving it to my boyfriend...