crossed signals

Man

 

I am attracted

with beautiful women

with shapely legs

and sexy bodies.

 

Woman

I am attracted

with handsome men,

muscular and virile.

 

Man

There will come a time,

Lust will turn into love.

 

Woman

I cannot make love

with a man with just lust in mind.

 

Man

Because we are sleeping,

We have to commit?

 

Woman

Yes, we are sleeping,

It is time to make the relationship serious

 

Man

Serious, you mean marriage?

Oh no!

 

Woman

 

I am not a sex object,

You have to make an honest

woman out of me.

 

Man

I am not ready,

Can we take a break?

 

Woman

Definitely this is where it is heading,

At least now I know.

 

The End

Reviews

[Kay]

Writing "The End" works great with the title. There are a number of crossed signals, misinterpreted from gender perspective, then the signals end entirely right after the woman says "now I know".

[sette]

thanks my friend for the nice review

[Wild Rose]

I cannot make love
To a man with just lust in mind

For me change the last line
to:
To a woman who doesn't take part
Lays back and eats peanuts

[sette]

i like the last stanza thanks for the idea...

[Wild Rose]

Had some like that . Think why bother

[Wild Rose]

That's the way thing go
Sometimes we dont want to commit too soon

[sette]

yes because of fear and other reasons thanks for the wonderful review my friend

[Donna]

Its sad that commitment is rare in relationships these days. Times have changed.

[sette]

so true donna and sometimes even for women too

[Ghost]

Most men do only want pleasure and freedom... But there are a hand full of us that want the commitment as well... I think men need to value women more because finding a good woman is hard to do when we only want one night stands... Thanks for sharing

[sette]

and i am glad you are different from the rest

[Oldsoul.J]

most men wants only pleasure and freedom; this is exactly what I always see around us nowadays.

[sette]

totally true thanks for the review

[Stella Armour]

more and more couples stay together now without marriage, yet still have a commitment to each other.

Marriage frightens some men lol...

[sette]

totally true thanks for the nice review