Death's Poison Kiss

Written after a math test...^^'

 

Never will I escape,

The pull is too strong.

Luring me close,

How can it be wrong?

 

I pick up the knife,

My mind growing numb.

Deeply I slice,

And now I am calm.

 

Over there you stand,

Looking so shocked.

Your brown eyes wide,

Like your world has been rocked.

 

Remember that night?

When I told you it all?

You held me tight,

Promised I'd never fall.

 

Well love, you were wrong,

And I stand here in bliss.

I don't need to be strong

For Death's Poison Kiss.

Author's Note

^^'

Reviews

[Dani California]

This flow is absolutely fabulous!
Your rhyme and rhythm rock!

Content: once again is intense and dark,
has an emotional impact that somewhat steals
one's breath. That last stanza took mine for a spell..

Though I'm one who tries to keep myself in light,
I do appreciate the creativity of darkness!
And you have it down... wow.

Again, excellent!

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

Wow, this is well written, Your rhymes were excellent your subject matter frighten me a bit because you said you wrote this after math class which indicates to me that you are young possible in high school. I just hope that the thought of suicide is just in your writting and not on your to do list. There is so much in this world to live for. Tommorrow will always come whether you're here or not. Better if you are here, cause you'll miss the suprise each new day brings. Again you have good talent, keep writing.

[Alysa]

The flow of this poem is beautiful. I really love your choice of words.