Who Will Miss Me?

Poem i randomly made up.

Who will miss me,

If I fall?

On top of this bridge,

Which stands so tall.

Who will miss me,

If I hang?

Dangling from this rope,

Brings a Bitter-Sweet tang.

Who will miss me,

If I cut too deep?

My blood pools around me,

As I fall forever asleep.

Who will miss me,

If I die?

I'll end this suffering,

And in heaven, I'll fly.

But,

Who will miss me?

I didn't do this for fun.

After, will I smile, or ask,

"What have I done?"

Author's Note

Not my best work, but still, tell me if you liked!

Reviews

[paparapapa]

This one's really dark. Speaks so much emotions - uncertainty, insecurity, wanting to be valued, and a lot more. Good job. Keep on writing. ;)

[Dove]

This poem hit me directly in my heart because I have felt the same way an enormous amount of times. I love how this poem is dark but still honest. Amazing job.

[Amber]

This is intense. I liked it. I've been through that phase.

[K.R.]

Dark, but honest. Life's never as bad as it seems, and far too often young people end their life without knowing that it gets better.

Well done!

[....]

very well written and enjoyed reading it.

[TWISTED NIGHTMARE]

i liked it...the thought of realizing who is actually going to be there... nicely written

[emma]

i think it was definitely good. i liked the repetition and i thought this was well written. by the way, i would miss you!

[africa]

It's pretty cool.