Searching for Clues

I will sacrifice my life for you

As the windows begin to shatter

The glass is spreading out clues

Do I search for an answer or does it matter?

 

As the windows begin to shatter

Should I pick up the pieces?

Or leave them where they clatter

In the mirror I can see myself plea

 

The glass is spreading out clues

Ashes begin to arise

I can’t see you in this room

The smoke has covered your eyes

 

Do I search for an answer or does it matter?

My life I sacrifice for you

As the clues begin to scatter

So I gather the pieces that I can use

Reviews

[quixotic_rose]

I don't know what it is about this one that's different from the others, maybe its the consistency of it, but I'm loving this. The whole picture you paint before my eyes with the details amazes me. it's takes me to a bedroom with a big mirror and large glass windows that scatter and break, metaphorically, with the internal struggle battling against the outside environment. love it!!

[emilythestrange]

Very different from your other poems... But great anyway!

[kublakhan27]

A little cryptic but that's cool with me...one of the more intriguing pieces, encourages multiple readings.

[Lost in Wonderland]

Beautiful piece full of love and dedication, this style suits you:)

[Serenity Faith]

Brilliant Brandon. I can relate to this piece very well. Your rhythm and flow was very well done. There's really nothing to critique, except offer you praise on a job well done. ^_^

[Brandon Mathis]

Thank you very much im honored that you like work

[Brandon Mathis]

sorry meant to say that you like my work, lol

[TheJordBaker]

very moving, very provocative. I find myself relating to this more than others. good work again!

[Brandon Mathis]

I love how you can relate yo my poems and thank you for likening it