Graceful B***h

If only things turned out different

Hips that move like dancing pistons,

Hair that flowed like the cruel sea.

Eyes that glimmered like the devil's own,

It was never meant to be.

Confidence too high to guide or admire,

figure full and burned like fire.

Inner thoughts were unkempt like me,

the trouble ahead I could not see.

Caught in her gaze seemed like an eternity of pain,

You fought to pull away,but only she would gain.

She left under a storm of hurtful words exchanged,

only now I realise I was short changed.

Reviews

[Rachelle]

Our impressions are reflections of our expectations and desires. Where does the blame fall? Who is the deceiver? When someone falls short of our expectations is it because he or she has really done so or is it because we are deluded by misguided hopes and expectations?

[Bob Sherunkle]

Something to mull over...

[Cassy Samuels]

lol...Graceful...B***h!
ok, you explained her...maybe happened in real life, idk
Cassy Samuels

[Bob Sherunkle]

Hah! I'm not saying ! thanks for reading.

[Cassy Samuels]

lolzzzz...

[lily]

Sounds so much like society today.. its scary.
Amazing write, well done.

[Bob Sherunkle]

Thanks Lily,dont mean to offend anyone!Thanks for taking the time to read it

[Trevor Barnett]

Sounds like most of my relationships. It's hard to find a good girl now a days. Another great poem Bob I really enjoyed it.

[Bob Sherunkle]

Trevor,I've given up!Thanks for reading.

[Stevo The POE-t]

First off the title was what captured my eye... So I had to read this... Upon reading it I really enjoyed it... It wasn't what I thought it was going to be... And I mean that in a good way man... Keep up the good work...

[Bob Sherunkle]

Stevo..thanks man.Much appreciated .

[Stevo The POE-t]

No problem at all

[Jeanmarie Flaherty]

I had to read this, the title made me giggle.


Fantastic work, I enjoyed it thoroughly,.. And nice to meet you Bob :)

[Bob Sherunkle]

Many thanks Jeanmarie,glad you liked it.Bit apprehensive about the title,thought I may get a back lash...all quiet on the western front.Nice to meet you also.

[Jeanmarie Flaherty]

When you get backlash that means you've affected someone... And you've done it right ;)

[Bob Sherunkle]

Why thank you very much...

[costa siwale]

I enjoyed reading this piece, its bloody awesome. Well done Bob

[Bob Sherunkle]

Wow! thanks you so much! That's very kind of you Costa.

[costa siwale]

You welcome