The Person I Use To Be

i was told to write something beautiful about myself so i am giving it a try

Girl why can't you see you got all in the bag

It's not like you look like an old hag

Your a beautiful person

As told by many

And boys, dont get me started

You have plenty

 

Your smile is amazing can light up a dark room

And the body you have can make zombies come out of their tombs

Your eyes tell the story of someone with love to share

A lot that no girl could ever compare

 

Your mind is amazing

Full of ideas, education, and music

A mind so powerful makes all the other girls sick

Your heart is filled with pain you dont expose

So you write in poems you seem to compose

 

Creative is something you've been for years

Writing when crying and faced with your worse fears

So stop downing yourself

Your a girl

And one day you will find some guy to give you the world

And treat you like the queen you are

So you won't have to always wish on stars

 

So go out there and show the people what you can be

Because the only thing i can be is ME!!!

 

Author's Note

OK i wrote this for someone special.

Reviews

[JelliFyshKissUs]

And there it is. I knew I didn't need to tell you. It's all there in your poem. Your creativity, intelligence, beauty, is seen by all of us. If only YOU would believe it yourself. Beautiful, beautiful work. This is going into my favorites. And look how quickly others responded to such positive work.

It's okay to tell about the things you hate, even about yourself, from time to time, but don't forget to tell about the things you love.

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If you don't love you..how can you love another! Self appreciation is a good thing..well written

[A-Lovely-Anxiety]

Very creative, I liked the style. Beautiful write, I hope you continue.