Stained Tears

In memory of 4pm EST today.

The dry rain commences and my heart now blue.

The tears pour down just for you.

I lost you today and I'll never get you back

why did the railroad hit this track?

I thought it was okay and we could last

but the moment I heard silence cast...

All I could do was think about the rain

yearning for more and losing again.

I love you, I do. Simple you see?

But I know you see me quite differently.

I'm drowning in this pool of tears

drowning and enveloped in all these fears.

They've came true and now you are lost,

in Davy Jones locker, forever tossed?

But I hope to find you one day soon

bring you back to where happiness looms.

But now I return to the tub I found

full of blood, tears, the lost but not found.

Author's Note

Ignore grammar mishaps. Tell me what you've found and feel. And for the record, if you read this, I don't want to lose you.

Reviews

[Cassandra D.]

A lovely, powerful poem.
I pretty much liked the rhyme play in this.

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful poem. The feeling of sadness of losing someone at the beginning. I like the next lines. Sort of a twist with words. Made me think. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Alz Alz]

the last stanza really left me feeling eerie... Very creepy poem, I very much so enjoyed it... 100/100!