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A Poem by Latifa
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i dedicate this poem to the lovely sun and the mighty moon for making our life so beautiful and i thank god for creating them

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hail to the golden queen
looking so fabulously preen
her gleaming rays ever so beautifully seen
stroking the silky pasture so heavenly green


bow to the king
to his majesty rise and sing
with throbbing hearts and vivid zing
rest your eyes upon his lurid ring

© 2013 Latifa


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Nice work, a classical subject for a poem looked at in a new way..

Posted 7 Years Ago


Latifa

7 Years Ago

thank you sir
great :) I like this :) you are so good!!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Latifa

7 Years Ago

glad you like it
Words worthy of tribute given to the sun and moon of the universe - yes, our king and queen of the day and night!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Latifa

7 Years Ago

thank you for taking the time and reading
Nice tribute to the heavenly orbs..king and queen...

Posted 7 Years Ago


Latifa

7 Years Ago

thank you for the great preview
Such a lovely ode to the sun and the moon. Lydi**

Posted 7 Years Ago


Latifa

7 Years Ago

thanks sweetie glad you liked it
Great work, really good personification of the sun and moon :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Latifa

7 Years Ago

thanks for the review
A beautiful poem for the moon and the sun. I appreciate them both. They are guides in life if we are wise. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


Latifa

7 Years Ago

thanks glad you liked it
A beautiful appreciation of God and his creation in a wonderful , rhyming poem...Bravo

Posted 7 Years Ago


Latifa

7 Years Ago

thank you sami
Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)

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Added on October 10, 2013
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Latifa
Latifa

oran, oran, Algeria



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