these eyes

these eyes

A Poem by broken_angel_girl

Behind these eyes is a girl that cries

A girl that runs away from her problems because she’s scared to face them

A girl that is afraid to be happy because every time she is her world falls apart.

Will you help this girl?

 She knows you can.

 you see her every day.

The girl you see is me

© 2010 broken_angel_girl


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Wonderful self reflection imagery...assuming I am reading it right. Questioning one's self.. asking for help from within.. I love this very much. I'm not one to comment on anything technical because I'm rather new to writing..but I can comment on how something makes me feel and if I can see the emotions that you mean to show. Your poetry really shows who you are.. the emotions are definitely felt from your words. Thank you for sharing!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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broken_angel_girl
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im me i do waht i want i am who i am. i wont and dont change to pleas anyone but mysef. i am very independant, i love my music. i am very passionat about anything i want to be. if i dont like you i w.. more..

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