REVANGE

You come to me
In a peaceful dream
You look at me
And you say I love you
You take my hand
And we run through fields  
Where love is planted
And happiness grows
Everything is so Heavenly
And when you look at me
My heart skips a beat
Then we fly through skies
Oh, so high
You are so beautiful
But then…
We reach a dark cloud
The dark side
You let go of me
And now I’m falling
Lost in the darkness
I am so blinded
Anger sweeps my mind and
I embrace that dark side when
I realize that
A man has the guts to cheat
On a faithful woman like me
I want revenge
First I dial the emergency digits
Before I pay you a visit  
And I admit it, officer I did it
I shot a man right through his heart
His eyes were open
And so was his mouth
He did me wrong
So wrong
He cheated on me
And now he’s gone
Down below
Hell awaits his soul
The devil is a liar so that’s where he belongs.

Reviews

[olla]

it is truly amazing how many are willing to give up so much for so little..

[Art]

those are some vengefull emotions there...maybe the guy should have been as faithfull as her...

[J Kiplinger Young]

I would change the title so that your reader does not go into it expecting to be drawn down into betray and revenge

[Dove]

woah, totally dark i am like over welmes with emotion right now!! GREAT write

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Deliciously dark! Intensely written, jam packed with emotion.