To My Friends

Poetry plea for understanding

Someone To Watch Over Me midi         To My Friends   Recently I have been told my poetry shows I have a bad mentality But I'm just trying to be me     I'm sorry if I have offended some although I honestly don't know how With me, what you see is what you get I write my poetry with no regrets     If I have offended you in some way Please don't be afraid to say Naive I very well may be For I honestly do not see How my poetry could offend Any of my precious friends     I am and have never been a sneak In my poetry my life you get a peek If I have a bad mentality Please tell me how this could be Honestly I can not see that I have a bad mentality     I stay in my own little group of friends On their reviews I do depend I do not see how I could offend I always try my best to do good Although in the past my intentions have been misunderstood     There is no halo upon my head of this I do know But there are no horns either or I would let them show For I am just me What you see is what you get I say this with no regret For I'm just trying to be myself I have never lived my life in stealth     By Ray Hamilton Not a poet and I know it! © Copyright 8 / 2008 All rights Reserved   Please visit me at The Poet's Nest

 

Reviews

[The Poor Man's Poet]

although I'm not one of those to whom you may have offended,
I think this is a nice piece of work, this page.
and I would like to read some of your work.
I know I have read some of it before as I am not
one to visit this site all that offten.
I, myself like to use humor when ever I can.
Poem's like: My Friend With Privileges, As A Poet, or A Spoken Word Poem.
I always say, This is not a read request, but a chance to entertain.