I Gave You Those Wings

I Gave You Those Wings

A Poem by Caitlin Lea

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I gave you those wings
when you did nothing but walk,
when you could not see sky,
when the clouds blocked your view,
I gave you those wings.

I gave you those wings
when your heart was too heavy,
when your soul was too weary,
when your face looked at ground,
I gave you those wings.

I gave you those wings
when you suddenly saw me,
when you saw what you could be,
when we danced, and were happy,
I gave you those wings.

I gave you those wings
and we grew them together,
when we loved each other,
when your face was familiar,
I gave you those wings.

I gave you those wings
when your wings flew away,
when your face turned away,
when my heart began to break,
I gave you those wings.

I gave you those wings
though you never were grateful,
I flew with you so loyal,
and you wanted no other,
I gave you those wings.

I gave you those wings
the wings that turned against me,
that did not care for me,
that chose someone else, for me,
I gave you those wings.

I gave you those wings
so you could learn to fly,
so you could travel on,
so you could see the sky,
I gave you those wings.

© 2011 Caitlin Lea




Reviews

excellent poem

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Posted 12 Years Ago


...like your second stanza the best, amazing write.

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Posted 12 Years Ago


Beautifully done. You have some lovely lines here.

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Posted 12 Years Ago


I gave someone wings, I love this :)

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Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on June 30, 2011
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Caitlin Lea
Caitlin Lea

Northwest, TX



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